Thursday, February 24, 2011

यादों की पहेली को




यादों की पहेली को
कुछ इस तरह सुलझाओ
बूझो तो बूझ जाओ
वरना भुलाते जाओ

तुमने भुला दिया है
इतना यकीन है पर
मैंने भुला दिया है
इसका यकीं दिलाओ

मुझे छोड़ के गए तुम
सब ले गए थे क्यूँ तुम
इतना रहम तो कर दो
इक घाव छोड़ जाओ

कुछ नफरतें पड़ी हैं
कहीं पे तुम्हारे घर में
मेरा है वो सामां तुम
वापस मुझे दे जाओ

मेरा ग़म का खज़ाना है
तेरे पास मुस्कराहट
अपना जो है ले जाओ
मेरा जो है दे जाओ

31 comments:

Dankiya said...

bahut khoob neelesh ji...

sudeshna said...

wowww....post modern literature ki ek bemisal misal.....u truely deserve all d awards that u hv received....

brajmohan said...

"तुमने भुला दिया है
इतना यकीन है पर
मैंने भुला दिया है
इसका यकीं दिलाओ "

बहुत खूब नीलेश जी :)

Gee said...

Bahut accha likha hai Misra-sundar,saral,sateek.bas laga ki last para kuch alag ho sakta tha.

Bibi said...

Brilliant !!

sex said...

yaadon ke jungle main sannata chaaya hua tha..misra ji ne patthar maar ke kohraam macha diya

vandana said...

BEHAD KHOOBSRAT :)

newavatar said...

Awesome!!! (reminds me of 'mera kuch samaan' song) :-)

• » Sυηηy Sιηgн said...

Nice MisHRA ji i like your story poem iamsunny.singh@gmail.com

• » Sυηηy Sιηgн said...

Can you change timing :-):-):)

Arshad Ali said...

Bahut Umda..!!

संगीता स्वरुप ( गीत ) said...

खूबसूरती से लिखे हैं एहसास

damini said...

amazing neelesh sir

damini said...

bht pyari kavita hai bht hi pyari

vicky said...

awesome...u r really a great writer proud to have people like u in our country..thanks for being a part in our lives through Yadon ka idiot box

vicky said...

awesome.a great writer.proud to have people like u in our country .thanks for being a part in our lives through yadon ka idiot box

SUSHIL said...

WITH THIS POEM I GO TO MY YAAD SAHER

Parul said...

gam ka khajana tera bhi hai mera bhi..waah!

Razi Shahab said...

bahut khoob

Ashu Agarwal said...

sir u r d best.... m waiting for ur next session...

chaugan said...

Nilesh ji
sadar namaskar
Facebook par aapko talashta raha lekin kamyab nahi hua. isliye aapke blog ka sahar le raha hu. "yadon ka idiot bo' main aapke pita ji ke sangharsh aur kamyabhi ki kahani sunkar behad achha laga. aap saobhagyashali hain ki unke yaha paida hue. aise shakhs par hum sab ko garv karma chahiye. FM pe aapki aawaz aur story tellig ka tareeka bahut pasand aata hai. aapke jawab ka intzarr karunga.
nitin
mail ID : upmanyunitin@gmail.com

Shivam said...

hi neelesh, really want to meet u once in my life..
i listened ur "bet with your papa"
i listened your papa voice also, gr8.
please call me whenever u have time please...

9266545304-shivam

AJAY CHAVDA said...

hello neelesh ji mian aap ka bahut bada fan ho.apne mujhe facebook se remove kyu kar diya .aur ha sir maine ek blog banaya hai main chahata ho aap us blog ko dekhe plz aur agar pasand aaye to follow bhi kare http://ajaychavda.blogspot.com/

anil acharya said...

mashaa allah neelesh ji..

anil acharya said...

wah ......sach me aapko koi nhi bhoola sakta

Anonymous said...

The pictures you have posted are really beautiful!!

rajnish kumar said...

सर बहुत बढ़िया
यादें होती है ताजा
जब आपको औऱ आपके गानों को सुनता हूं

Dwivedi said...

very soft and honest expression...
have started liking this particular aspect of ur style of composition... especialy ur song 'unka khayal aatey hi ..' well done Sir :)

हिमानी said...

कुछ नफरतें पड़ी हैं
कहीं पे तुम्हारे घर में
मेरा है वो सामां तुम
वापस मुझे दे जाओ

....
really nice

journey... said...

very nice poem sir.

anil acharya said...

thank you neelesh ji...k aap hame itni sundar kavita...sunate h...

beeti yaado ke jharokho me jab dekhta huu tab kuch kisse yaad aate hai...kuch apne kuch paraye kuch jaane kuch anjaane kuch machalte armaan yaad aate h...unme se kuch yaad rah jaate hai ..kuch bhool jaata hu..

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